WOW MRS FORD I NEVER KNEW BEING SWEATY COULD BE SO GOOD! https://www.youtube.com/watch? v=uc2UEfWjvo8 S A W E SWAG
Y T SURELY POINT IS THE SAME AS STATEMENT? JUST WITH MORE DELIBERATE CONNONTATIONS . WE BOTH AGREE ON
EVIDENCE! AND ANALYSIS! I LIKE THE ADDITION OF THE L FOR LINK BUT SURELY Y FOR YES I HAVE ANSWERED THE QUESTION IS MORE ACTIVE LESS PASSIVE
WHY? So that everyone approaches the same thing in the same way Why waste time teaching the same thing 10 different ways? Every subject (almost) has an element of writing
All of us want students to get into good habits early on Teach them it once well and they can transfer it from subject to subject
Y waste time breaking bad habits later on? PEE ON A GOOD DAY Question How is the mouse presented in the Gruffalo? Fine this answers the question POINT The mouse is brave and tricks the Gruffalo Yes this is evidence but the style is awful and is breeding bad habits for later on. The use of quote will never be suitable beyond year 9
EVIDENCE A quote that shows this is, Just follow behind me and soon youll see everyone is afraid of me EXPLANATION Being able to trick a Gruffalo is brave. Nothing about this is analytical. It really just repeats the point and adds little to the paragraph SWEATY ON A GOOD DAY Question How is the mouse presented in the Gruffalo? STATEMENT The mouse is brave and tricks the Gruffalo, WEAVE
instructing him to EVIDENCE just follow behind me and soon youll see everyone is afraid of me ANALYSIS plus T The image of a tiny mouse being followed by a huge Gruffalo is not only humorous but also metaphorical in terms of role reversal and the mouse's ability to be canny and quick witted. The use of afraid being spoken in first person by the mouse also gives strength to his character and . YES I HAVE ANSWERED THE QUESTION!
WHAT? STATEMENT WEAVE EVIDENCE ANALYSIS TECHNIQUE YES TOP TIPS
KEEP THIS SHORT MAKE SURE IT ANSWERS THE QUESTION USE THE WORDS OF THE QUESTION t n e m e
t a St THE THING YOU KNOW/BELIEVE. THE ANSWER TO THE QUESTION. CONNOTATIONS: FACTUAL, TRUTHFUL, CONCISE, CLEAR TOP TIPS MAKE THIS THE EASIEST ROUTE POSSIBLE USE THE CONTEXT TO HELP YOU
RE-READ FOR SENSE RE-JIG THE EVIDENCE AS NECESSARY e v a e W A WAY TO GET FROM YOUR STATEMENT TO YOUR EVIDENCE.
CONNOTATIONS: SMOOTH, CONTEXTUALISED WEAVE IT TO WIN IT! NO WEAVE Typical paragraph Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two friends running for the bus we chased Olympic Gold. THIS IS BAD IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE Or even worse Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two friends running for the bus and I quote we chased Olympic Gold. THIS IS YUCK TERRIBLE STYLE WEAVE
Forster uses a metaphor to show the excitement of the two friends running for the bus as they chased Olympic Gold. THIS IS GREAT THE EVIDENCE COULD ACTUALLY BE YOUR OWN WORDS TOP TIPS KEEP THIS SHORT COPY IT OUT EXACTLY e c n e
d i Ev DONT FORGET . THE WORDS FROM THE TEXT IN XXX. CONNOTATIONS: BORROWED, ACCURATE, PROOF TOP TIPS MAKE THIS THE LONGEST PART OF
YOUR PARAGRAPH SQUEEZE EVERY LAST BIT OUT OF YOUR EVIDENCE a n A s i s y l
CONSIDER OTHER INTERPRETATIONS ADD SOME S.W.A.G THE LONGEST PART OF THE PARAGRAPH. HIGHER ORDER SKILL CONNOTATIONS: DETAILED, BALANCED, INSIGHTFUL SINGLE WORD ANALYSIS GLORY
TOP TIPS MAKE SURE THIS IS ACCURATE USE THE 3 X RULE h c Te e u q ni
ADD THIS IN ANWHERE YOU LIKE THE TECHNICAL HOW. THE IDENTIFICATION OF THE WAY CONNOTATIONS: SPECIFIC, ACCURATE, NAMED HOW? Staff taught SWEATY in a PD session or such like
Worked examples provided for reference Each department assigned a SWEATY English Expert All classrooms provided with a
visual reference for consistency Teachers feed back on their SWEATY success Yes we all write so much better! S.W.E.A.T.Y S= STATEMENT. Your answer W = WEAVE. The build up to your
quote/evidence E= EVIDENCE. Your short quote A = ANALYSIS. The language analysis of your quote. Longest Part T = TECHNICAL TERM. The key term that describes the language THIS CAN MOVE AROUND. Y = YES IT ANSWERS THE QUESTION I DONT CARE IF I AM SWEATY AS I KNOW IT REALLY WORKS! THANKS MRS
FORD! YEAR 7 Yes really! Hello, yep I wrote it. SWEATY is such an easy system for formulating analytical paragraphs. 949 TIPS FOR SWEATY SUCCESS 1. My STATEMENT is short 2. My STATEMENT answers the question (ATQ)
3. I have WOVEN in a piece of EVIDENCE 4. My EVIDENCE is concise and accurate 5. I have included a TECHNICAL TERM 6. My TECHNICAL TERM is accurate and spelt correctly 7. My ANALYSIS doesnt repeat my statement 8. My ANALYSIS is the longest part of my paragraph 9.YES I have answered the question! What do we want death to PEE When do we want it NOW!
LEO the lion goes GER. Losing Electrons Oxidation, Gaining Electrons Reduction. Oxidation-reduction reactions. Abbreviated to redox reactions. Occur together in reactions. Can't have one without the other. Oxidizing agent. Species involved in removing electrons.
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